I'll start prepping for this
Aaaangst.
Will work on this
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1o74U-mkXBL4FrA7YWASzZVoDKd1XIc8Y?usp=sharingCan the QC check page 10? I kinda got confused if the text was supposed to be in the box or not.On page 6, the sfx in the 3rd panel wasn't translated so I reused the one in the last panel.
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1o74U-mkXBL4FrA7YWASzZVoDKd1XIc8Y?usp=sharing
Can the QC check page 10? I kinda got confused if the text was supposed to be in the box or not.
On page 6, the sfx in the 3rd panel wasn't translated so I reused the one in the last panel.
pg 1 pn 3 b1: reads weird. maybe remove "That's"pg 5 pn 3 b1: "Has" -> "had"pg 9 bn 3 b3: "Make" -> "take"pg 10 seemed fine to me.
pg 1 pn 3 b1: reads weird. maybe remove "That's"pg 5 pn 3 b1: "Has" -> "had"pg 9 bn 3 b3: "Make" -> "take"
pg 10 seemed fine to me.
>>5735Thanks for the QC. On page 9, I would argue to keep "make" instead. Like didn't they just get home and the next normal thing to do would be to cook/make dinner (obviously they didn't do this lol)"take" could mean the same (if that was what you were going for) but I think that's kind of a stretch
>>5735
Thanks for the QC.
On page 9, I would argue to keep "make" instead. Like didn't they just get home and the next normal thing to do would be to cook/make dinner (obviously they didn't do this lol)
"take" could mean the same (if that was what you were going for) but I think that's kind of a stretch
>>5737sorry, I meant the second half of that sentence."I'll make dinner, so you go [make -> take] a load off..."
>>5738ohhh lol gotcha. Updated the page!
>>5738
ohhh lol gotcha. Updated the page!
Is this ready for release?
Corrections from Dynasty Team: "Story so far page": Manicurist Tsutusmi -> Tsutsumipg 2 pn 1 b1: end -> endedpg 2 pn 1 b3: "that's what having a partner" remove the "a" between what and havingpg 2 pn 2 b1: punctuation after managerpg 13 pn 4 b1: something "I" wantsorry, I missed all that on page 2.
Corrections from Dynasty Team: "Story so far page": Manicurist Tsutusmi -> Tsutsumipg 2 pn 1 b1: end -> endedpg 2 pn 1 b3: "that's what having a partner" remove the "a" between what and havingpg 2 pn 2 b1: punctuation after managerpg 13 pn 4 b1: something "I" want
sorry, I missed all that on page 2.
>>5744Updated my link.If that recap page is messed up, it's probably been messed up since I copy and paste that for each chapter...No worries on missing the mistakes. It happens. But thanks for relaying the corrections from the Dynasty Team.
>>5744
Updated my link.
If that recap page is messed up, it's probably been messed up since I copy and paste that for each chapter...
No worries on missing the mistakes. It happens. But thanks for relaying the corrections from the Dynasty Team.
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