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>> No.5726  

I'll start prepping for this

>> No.5727  
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Aaaangst.

>> No.5731  

Will work on this

>> No.5733  

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1o74U-mkXBL4FrA7YWASzZVoDKd1XIc8Y?usp=sharing

Can the QC check page 10? I kinda got confused if the text was supposed to be in the box or not.

On page 6, the sfx in the 3rd panel wasn't translated so I reused the one in the last panel.

>> No.5735  

pg 1 pn 3 b1: reads weird. maybe remove "That's"
pg 5 pn 3 b1: "Has" -> "had"
pg 9 bn 3 b3: "Make" -> "take"

pg 10 seemed fine to me.

>> No.5737  

>>5735

Thanks for the QC.

On page 9, I would argue to keep "make" instead. Like didn't they just get home and the next normal thing to do would be to cook/make dinner (obviously they didn't do this lol)

"take" could mean the same (if that was what you were going for) but I think that's kind of a stretch

>> No.5738  

>>5737
sorry, I meant the second half of that sentence.
"I'll make dinner, so you go [make -> take] a load off..."

>> No.5739  

>>5738

ohhh lol gotcha. Updated the page!

>> No.5743  

Is this ready for release?

>> No.5744  

Corrections from Dynasty Team:
"Story so far page": Manicurist Tsutusmi -> Tsutsumi
pg 2 pn 1 b1: end -> ended
pg 2 pn 1 b3: "that's what having a partner" remove the "a" between what and having
pg 2 pn 2 b1: punctuation after manager
pg 13 pn 4 b1: something "I" want

sorry, I missed all that on page 2.

>> No.5747  

>>5744

Updated my link.

If that recap page is messed up, it's probably been messed up since I copy and paste that for each chapter...

No worries on missing the mistakes. It happens. But thanks for relaying the corrections from the Dynasty Team.



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