pg 1. "Yet here we are." lowercase "yet" since the previous fraces started with a lowercase letter "Im not interested in love">>>move to the right a pixel or two. make it bigger like in the raw "But">>>bigger "Because I don't want a lover">>>bigger move down a bit. pg.2 "I see...">>>make bigger. "Wanna come to my house again today?">>>make it just a bit bigger like the raw. "Kinu-chan...">>>make it a whole lot bigger...[see raw] pg7 "come let's stop">>>move down the rest seem good great job on the editing and what a great story and translation!