page 5 This was done in order to avoid a line with only "...", since I anticipate that the input "Avoid putting punctuations on its own line" also includes this case. But I really don't like the hyphenation of "throbbing" that was required in order to avoid getting "..." on a separate line, and would like to resurrect the previous version. Would that be OK? >>>Sure page 7 Question1: How much should the right (completely white) edge be cropped? It was in the previous version rather wide (perhaps due to the debinding) and I initially thought that it should be as wide as possible. The input from grey said to crop all edges, and I have now selected a cropping that I think gives approximately the same amount of white margin on both sides of the top panel. Does this look OK? > I can't remember why I asked that to be cropped, but I usually ask for edge cropping to remove the unnecessary blacks (http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/tora_ni_tsubasa_ch01#2) If there's no black thingy there, I probably made a mistake. Question2: Would it be OK to have "...?" on a separate line for the bubble containing "Shall we undress...?". I think the present hyphenation "un-dress" looks rather hideous, and would like do avoid it. In the same vein, I also think that the "..." in "b- b- but..." might look better if placed at a separate line (since it then would better fit the shape of the bubble). @Procyon Could we use "strip" instead of "undress"? >>>B-b-but... > B-but... -one line? page 21 Question: The "aah..." either had to be reduced in size to fit into its bubble on one line, or it had to be hyphenated as "a-ah..." to split it over two lines (and keep the same size as the other text). I picked the solution with two lines. In order to use a larger font, I wonder if it in such cases would be acceptable to either put the "..." on a separate line, or perhaps drop them altogether. >>> Better reduce the size; I'm reading "A-ah" like a stutter page 22 Question: This question is related to the sequel "Rainy Holidays", but the present page contains bubbles that is rather similar in shape. What is the recommended solution when a long word has to be inserted into a very thin and high bubble? Will it in such cases be acceptable to use vertical text instead of horizontal? I think that neither a very tiny font nor a solution with several hyphenations (and a small font) gives a good solution, so I would like to avoid those if possible. >>>Where's the page? It's on a case by case basis. Like: a. the font can do trick http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/konohanasakuya_hime#25 b. redraw the bubble c. other possible solutions