P55 Sweet Melancholy Sweet Secret Sweet Heart (In case you want to edit it in) P56 [Translation checked: full body intro text] (Changes are put in DOUBLE quotation marks. Deletions are in curly brackets {} ) A three part work, the 'Amai' series. Though the publishing period for these 3 pieces was considerably spaced out, "not much time has passed in the manga itself." "They were a series of events which resolved themselves over the winter." I had a considerably good time drawing the two in this series. "However, drawing a 'cool-type' girl was sure difficult..." That's why her characterization might be a bit poor. "I feel like asking for Nagisa's forgiveness a little." (add in this)"I had both of them appear in the other connected stories of 「Nisemono No Koi」 'Fake Love'. " Drawing a connected story like this was fun. "Aside from that, I took the liberty (since this was a doujin) to draw those interesting stuff dolls." If you took enjoyment from this humble story it would make me very happy. To the right is a paper illustration published at Comitia on May 2009. P57 And yet those cute things, do not suit me at all. => Those cute things, do not suit me at all. (There is a repetition of 'And yet' in the prev panel) ーWhy, with this kind of figure, => ーWhy was I born with this kind of figure, Was I born, I wonder. => I wonder. P58 --Yes, for example => ーLike that girl over there, ーfor example... Fluffy hair, tiny stature, and a cute voice- => That Fluffy hair, tiny stature, and a cute voice- I wanted to be born with this kind of feeling--... => I wanted to be born with these characteristics--... ...i, Nagisa-senpai! => ーUmm, Nagisa-senpai! Eh? Ah, me?? => Eh? Err, me?? (Optional. I'm probably too anal lol) P60 Sparkling dazzlingly, The ideal girl like whom I wanted to be- Towards me!? => A sparkly dazzlingly ideal girl like whom I wanted to be- Confessed to me!? Though I'm happy, ...'cause we're both girls and stuff... => Though I'm happy... We're both girls... ...Above anything else, because I think, probably, => ...Above anything else, probably Like => I like P61 What is it, this murderous objection- => Such killer lines- ...Yes, I think, definitely, => ...No, she's definitely What she's seeking from me is someone to play her 'prince'. => Looking for someone to play her 'Prince' P62 Ah, no. I'll come meet you at lunchtime then. (Since you even made me a bentou, right?) P65 S, sorry... I stared at you... => S- sorry for staring at you like that... P..., Please don't mind that~ Momoko-chan too, eat, here. => Erm... You don't need to apologise for that~ You should start eating too, Momoka-chan. What to do...... => What should I do... P66 Be that as it may... It would be considerably overdoing it, however... => Though frankly speaking... It would be pretty much impossible... With this appearance, and at a girl's high school, after all, => In a girl's high school with this appearance... --But, without thinking of anything, => ...But without a doubt, --We naturally => We'd naturally P67 Eh? This? => Eh? This is... Ah, er! Y, yeah, bought by my mother! => Ah, erm! Y, yeah, those were bought by my mother! Then, this, => Then this plush toy, P68 But, what is it I wonder- This murky feeling...? => But what's with this murky feeling? P69 Softly, => She's soft With a sweet smell... => And smells sweet... ...Se-, Senpai...- P70 No...... I'm, happy. => It's fine... I'm happy about it. => ...Ah... => ...Oh... (Optional edit) That's right, this girl, she's serious. => Oh yea. This girl is serious about me isn't she? --She's, seeking me...? => Isn't she yearning for me...? -the proper resolve, => -prepare your resolve, alright? 0071 It's settled, isn't it. That I want to be this girl's prince-- => It's settled huh. I want to be this girl's prince. (Optional edit if the redrawing of the background is too taxing) --It's painful => Why is it so painfu- P72 Even though, I'm being enveloped, in this gentle a scent--... => Even though I'm being enveloped in this a gentle scent. Er...? This is...? => Eto...? This place is...? (Optional edit) The infirmary. Seems like you overworked yourself, so you should rest awhile, is what sensei said. => The infirmary. Seems like you overworked yourself, so you should rest a while, is what sensei said. Being together with me, you overdid it, right? => Being together with me overworked you didn't it? Ah... => Oh... (Optional) P73 at... all, though... => at all... (Rationale: I thought Momoka was saying it at my first glance) -But... => Why am I... --It's pathetic, but, I have no idea what I should do. => so pathetic? I don't even know what to do anymore! I'm not able to become Momoko's prince... => But I'm not able to become Momoko's prince anymore... P74 I thought that I could always stay by Momoko's side-... => 'So that I could always stay by Momoko's side...' was what I thought. That she would like me for my true self, I don't have any confidence. => I didn't have any confidence that she would like me for my true self. (Optional edit) --But, pushing myself too far, the result was this collapse. => But I have pushed myself too far and collaspsed as a result. That regarding senpai, I like everything. => That I liked everything about senpai. --That's why, from the start, I knew it. => That's why I'd already knew... That senpai was a girl who liked cute things. => That senpai was a girl who liked cute things from the start. Eh...-? => Wha-...? (Optional) Eh-- => Whaaaat? (Optional) P75 The senpai as you are right now, => As the senpai as you are right now... your cute points, properly, show them to me-- => Please show me all your cute points properly! (Oh shit. Here comes the sex lol) P76 Because she's accepting my true self for myself => On its own, my body is responding- On its own, my body is responding- => Because she's accepting my true self. P79 Mo... Momoka...? You're okay? => Mo... Momoka...? Are you okay with that? --As for me, At another time ♥ => -As for me, How about next time (Insert heart-shaped character) How to say it, like this..... For only me to...... => How do I say it... it was only me who got... P80 --Somehow or another, => Somehow or rather, (Optional, if redrawing is difficult) In this way or that, this sweetie seems => This sweetie seems... =END=