S002 - <1BBB> 「もちろん、シズクのパパに、よ♪」=「Your father, of course♪」 #alt. papa >changed to Papa. - <8657> 「ですが学園側から『このような素晴らしい部は、是非続けて下さい』と言われて……そのまま細々と、続けていたのです」=「But then the academy officials said, "Please continue such a wonderful club"… So I ended up continuing.」 >changed academy to school for consistency S010 <2F80> だけどせっかくのエリスのお誘いです、断れるはずもありません。=However, since Eris invited me, I cannot refuse. > couldn't refuse (keeping past tense, they've already set off) S011 <2DF2> しばらくしてエリスは一着手に取ると、笑顔でわたくしに見せました。=After a while, Eris took one of the clothes into her hand and looked at me with a smile. >took a set of clothes - <4A0C> 「わっ、わたくしは……和服が好きなので……というか、学園の制服と着物以外は着た事がありません」=「I-I... Because I like Japanese style clothes... I do not wear anything else besides the school uniform and kimono. 」 > Changed to "I don't wear anything else besides the school uniform or kimono." - <6EDE> 「もちろん! もう見ているだけなんて、ガマンできない……あぁん★」=「Of course! Just by looking, I already cannot stand it... Aan★」 >changed to "Just by looking, I'm already unable to stand it" S014 - 「あぁ、ああんっ★ わたくしも……イキ、そう★ ああんッ★ すごくいい★ 天に、昇りそう★ あぁぁっ★★」=「Ah, aahn★ Me too, I'm coming★ Aahn★ So good★ I'm losing it★ Aaah★★」 >This line... fuck this line >_< Had to cut the first and third hearts to fix it. It's still fine though, just that they didn't really need to go so overboard with the damned hearts lol S015 <169C> ……相変わらず素っ裸のままですが。=... Though, her, being naked wasn't. >removed those commas, need to listen to the line to double check though. S017 <4579> 自分だけが、違う時間の流れに放り出されてしまった、そんな感じでした。=Only myself had been cast into a different flow of time. That's how I felt. >sounds pretty awkward, changed to "Only I had" but considering "I alone had been" <6CF3> わたくしは布団から飛び出して、エリスの背中に呼びかけました。=Leaping out of the blanket, I call out to Eris. >called - <7A04> 「だから、だからいつか、エリスがもっと素直で可愛い子の事を好きになったら、わたくしの側から離れていってしまう……それが恐くて、恐くて……ぅぅ」=「And I'm scared that, one day, you'll fall in love with someone else cuter, and can express herself better than me... then I'll be left all alone...」 >Changed "and can express" to "who can express" S018 - <3ECA> 「ワタシ、この学園に来て、ホントに良かった」=「I'm glad I came to this academy.」 >changed academy to school for consistency - <43D4> 「いっぱいいっぱい、いろんなコトがあったけれど……やっぱり最高に幸せなコトは、シズクと出会えたコトよ★」=「A lot much has happened... But the best thing to happen to me, was meeting you, Shizuku★」 > changed to "So much has"