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File: たえちゃんとじみこさん.png -(1575843 B, 1359x1920) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.
1575843 No.5424  

RAW: http://www.mediafire.com/file/h2q9eyegjo47hmq

>> No.5432  

I'd like to translate this one, if anyone's interested in editing.

>> No.5446  

>>5432 Go ahead, someone would eventually pick this up. If not maybe i'll pick this up after i'm done with another manga.

>> No.5447  

>>5446

Okay. I'll post translations then.

>> No.5451  
File: Tae-chan 1.txt -(17818 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

Here's chapter 1.

>> No.5452  

Currently editing this, it'll be done in a day or two, hopefully.

>> No.5453  

Chapter 1 done: https://mega.nz/#!1xoFmIbB!EKeT6W1AbB7CNr4KfFmS2hYLIiT9ZAs4NbjDUDpCmm8

>> No.5454  
File: tae_miko_1_qc1.txt -(1338 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

>>5452

Notes on typesetting; one change to the text.

>> No.5456  

>>5454

I think that last one is a good change. It's Tae responding to Miko's threat to call her "Mom" at work, and "give me a break" conveys that a lot better than "forgive me".

>> No.5457  
File: Tae-chan 2.txt -(15198 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

Here's the translation for chapter 2.

>> No.5458  

Updated version: https://mega.nz/#!18gzBZiZ!-1nqOXIzSNTYNfTxrI-U-y2kqd0-Uy0EgBNCNh_zaYE

>>5454
Yeah sorry for the mistakes, I haven't done any sort of editing for a long ass while now so I'm kinda rusty.

>>5457
Will do chapter 2, hopefully will be done within a week or two.

>> No.5459  

>>5458

No need to apologize. Welcome back.

I think you might be able to go a pt or two bigger still on some of the text if you want to, but I think this is fine. We can release this.

>> No.5463  

Took longer than I expected, but it's finally done. Chapter 02: https://mega.nz/#!cw5WzI5R!Ld4-AIlXkcMnal-BfyQwEsX60JuaYEBF2Nh6UjsYlwg

>>5457
In page 02 Miko called Tae "sensei" instead of "senpai", was it a typo or something?

>>5459
I think it's fine as is, if I bump the font size any higher there's some sentences that wouldn't fit in the bubble.

>> No.5464  

>>5463

Oh, yeah, that's a typo, it should say Sempai, sorry.

>> No.5465  
File: tae_miko_2_qc1.txt -(1547 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

>>5463

A little typesetting, and a suggested revision to the text.

Also, chapter 1 had one "sempai" and two "senpai"s. Chapter two has 4 "sempai"s and one "senpai". I feel like we should pick one for the series and stick with it; I tend to favor "senpai," but the current tally is 5:2 in "sempai"s favor, with another majority vote on its way after the "sensei" correction.

>> No.5466  

>>5465

I usually use sempai, since it's consistent with hepburn romanization (and by analogy to "tempura"), but I guess I slipped up a few times. I'd generally be in favor of keeping it with the "m".

As for that line you changed, my interpretation was that Tae didn't like the idea of a non-reciprocal relationship where she was touched by Miko, but Miko had to touch herself. I didn't realize the use of 自分 as object in causative sentences is ambiguous. I checked and it is, so your reading is valid, and it definitely fits better since it requires fewer assumptions to work.

The other changes are fine, except you wrote "50mm" instead of "500mm". I think she's talking about using a lens with a focal length of 500mm. I've double-checked common usage and I think "on 500mm" should be changed to either "at 500mm" or "with a 500mm lens", whichever fits better.

>> No.5467  

Updated Chapter 01: https://mega.nz/#!lgQQAQBB!7Mabre3hMmEItoNRo4rbSCbZ4xSIm_Y7Yfaiak5xnYA
Updated Chapter 02: https://mega.nz/#!FxR2XCya!t6uZL6w9dKZpfXOrwkPa_zOGbgOeipri4I6YUULML8Q

Lemme know if I missed something.

>> No.5468  

>>5467

These both look fine for release to me, thanks for the good work!

I'll be done with chapter 3 soon.

>> No.5469  
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356066

Oh god, I forgot to remove "so" in one of the sentences of chapter 01 page 05. Here's the fixed page, my bad.

>> No.5470  

>>5467

Nit: on 01.png, you capitalize the 'W' in "We're going out, right?" This is a continuation from the first panel, "Say," and in other instances, such an enjambment across bubbles puts the first letter of the second line in lowercase. (See, for instance, 02.png, "the room comes with an installed bath," or 04.png, "making my kouhai.") I feel like the 'W' should be lowercase, but it's not worth holding up the release for.

I think this is good for release.

>> No.5471  
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482019

>>5470
Let me know if there's some thing I missed. Again, my bad.

>> No.5472  

>>5467
>>5469
>>5471
Released:
https://yuri-project.net/tae-chan-and-jimiko-san-ch01/
https://yuri-project.net/tae-chan-and-jimiko-san-ch02/

>> No.5474  

>>5471
(Noticed on the homepage:) "..., hold each naked, ..." ← Isn't "other" from "each other" missing?

>> No.5475  
File: pg 03 error.png -(40328 B, 502x287) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.
40328

pg 03, "I'll get to you join in my perfect lifestyle"

wouldt it sound better "I'll get to you to join" or "I'll get you to join"?

>> No.5476  
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21525

pg 02, "beorehand"
beforehand

>> No.5477  

>>5474
Seems like it was missing in the script. Fixed: http://puu.sh/BjMbJ/7e348173d2.png

>>5475
Fixed: http://puu.sh/BjMaZ/607f2dafb4.png

>>5476
Fixed: https://puu.sh/BjMbl/08f9ac77e4.png

>> No.5478  
File: Tae-chan 3.txt -(17254 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

Here's chapter 3.

I've avoided TL notes so far, but in this chapter I've put in some notes at the end.

I'm of two minds about them. On the one hand, there are quite a few references that the average Japanese reader would know but that will be meaningless to English readers, which is a good reason to add TL notes. But at the same time, I generally like to avoid notes unless absolutely necessary, and I think the chapter still would make sense without them, since it's easy to tell from context the significance of certain references even if you don't know exactly what they refer to.

Let me know what you think about what we should do with them.

>> No.5479  

>>5477
Updated.

>> No.5481  

>>5478

My thoughts, for what it's worth.

I essentially agree with your principles; try to avoid using translators notes, and use them only to explain things that the audience of the source material would be expected to know that the target audience for the adaptation would not be expected to know.

This means that you need to the nature of your audience into consideration when you opt for translator's notes; different audiences can be expected to know different things.

In this case, I think it's reasonable not to expect a general audience not to know about Japanese brands that don't have much presence outside of Japan; Palette-chan, Meiji, and MOS. The main audience for this work isn't exactly general, though, and I don't think it's "absolutely necessary" to provide some idea of the Yen's relative value. I feel like they would also have some idea of the significance of the 15th in relation to Valentine's day. This one is more questionable, as I don't know how universal post-Valentine's sales are, but given the context of the line in which the reference appears, I feel like you could safely leave out the end note, if you're trying to avoid them.

I have very little idea of the relative fame of high-end Belgian chocolates inside and outside of Japan. If these are household names in Japan (I guess more like Godiva and Lindt are in the US?), then the note is probably warranted. If they're equally known in Japan and elsewhere (whether known to many in both places or known almost exclusively to chocolate fanciers in both places), then I would let the text stand without the note.

>> No.5482  
File: Tae-chan 3 notes.txt -(468 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

>>5481

Okay. I see your point, and I agree. So for the notes I'll leave in only the ones that readers probably will not note but that the original readers would certainly know.

>Palette-chan: a popular doll.
>Meiji: a large food company that sells mass-produced cheap chocolate among other things.
>MOS: a fast food chain.

And here's a file with the same thing, just so it stands out more.

>> No.5484  

Goddamn, sorry for the delay.
Chapter 03: https://mega.nz/#!Z0gFjTIb!5hF-pzDG_FlnDLvNTs_nCTECgn5N2xXqqVlw2E1h0RA

>> No.5485  

>>5484

We're not on a tight schedule. Take your time.

I think this is good to release. I don't know how much this would defeat the purpose of the joke, but I can't help but wonder if the "Ahreegatoe" you put in the credits might not be more effective as an "Eetadahkeemass."

>> No.5486  

Updated:https://mega.nz/#!J5Q3VSbD!MAwrgirXEDT2gnnw3xeUQnsnXCTo8aGku7Sot6RIcvk

>added a missing sfx
>replaced bounch -> bounce
>the dash in pg03 was wrong

Lemme know if there's more I missed.

>>5485
I know, but I can't help wanting to release this in a good schedule so we can be up-to-date or something.

And yeah you're right. I'm a dumbass, I dunno why I even wrote "Ahreegahtoe". My b

>> No.5487  
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>>5486

I think chapter 3 looks good to go. Here's the translation for chapter 4.

>> No.5492  

>>5486
Released.

>> No.5500  
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Here's the translation for chapter 5

>> No.5501  

Whooops. I'm still alive, I guess.
Chapter 04: https://mega.nz/#!l4B3zYqK!Oz3x9AufXxl_UtITbk1ZDSnCHX6eOHKYM8B7NxW3Ayg

>> No.5502  

>>5501

Miko's bubble on the last page is blank.

"What is the meaning of this!?"

Other than that, looks good.

>> No.5503  
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505973

>>5502
Messed that one up when I was doing the credit page, my b.

>> No.5504  

>>5501
>>5503

01.png

Admist this very yuri daily life, a new love is blossoming? -> Amidst this very yuri daily life, a new love is blossoming? ("Admist" to "Amidst")

05.png

I'm fine with whatever with can do here. -> I'm fine with whatever we can do here. (second "with" to "we")

06.png

Miko-chan doesn't have breasts, -> Miko-chan doesn't have breasts, so... (add "so...")

08.png

It's my first time being stared like that by a woman... -> It's me first time being stared at like that by a woman... (add "at")

Miko-chan is reaally sexy. -> Miko-chan is reaaally sexy. (nit; three 'a's is liss likely to be mistaken for a tyop than two 'a's)

>> No.5505  

>>5504
https://mega.nz/#!slAWWY5b!ldakbKSWR0u8n4NNTRcEprV1mDViB-HLQ2m0QD8iAM0
Lemme know if I missed some shit.

>> No.5506  

>>5505

I think this is good. Let's release it.

>> No.5510  
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579414

Hold the fuck up! Page 01 seems fucked for some reason and it seems like one the cleaned layers wasn't enabled, sorry for the mistake lads.

>> No.5511  

>>5510

What were the giveaways? I don't notice any obvious difference between the page in the zip and the page posted here.

>> No.5512  
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71097

>>5511
"Tae-chan" has no outer glow and pic related.

>> No.5513  

>>5505
>>5510
Released.

>> No.5520  
File: Tae-chan 6.txt -(18304 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

Here's the translation for chapter 6.

>> No.5548  

Here's raws for chapters 6 and 7.

6: https://mega.nz/#!qcpUlArA!BO0YdmYigey0B_rqPGVQhzmmQRafi5sF8jh58bOD2Gw
7: https://mega.nz/#!rJRnnCSR!XR-jdx3uHSV2rZA3Awb-Kj0VKvC_urURFJ2Q2vhmM7Y

>> No.5569  

May as well give this a boost because boy does this become the wildest relay race ever.

>>5548
TLs from a /u/ anon
https://pastebin.com/bm8d8tze
https://pastebin.com/SLLfMQRX

RAWs from Sadpanda
ch8: https://exhentai.org/s/2919a7c00c/1332065-362
ch9: https://exhentai.org/s/73e3ba8712/1373540-380
ch10: https://exhentai.org/s/814422064e/1402250-387

>> No.5570  

>>5569
Some more TLs from me (because after reading ch10, how could I not get caught up?)
ch8: https://pastebin.com/TJUfqHzU
ch9: https://pastebin.com/vFV7aHbU
ch10: https://pastebin.com/Va7gx9Jc

>> No.5571  

>>5570

I was still translating this, and I'm not very happy with you taking this series over without talking to me, especially since no one's signed on to edit the earlier chapters I'd already released, so it's not like there was some big rush to get translations out. The /a/non who posted those chapters was me, hoping to get some more eyes on it for potential editors.

>> No.5572  

>>5571
My apologies. It was mainly out of my own curiosity after the latest chapter turned out to be [spoiler]best friend's mom age gap[/spoiler].

>> No.5573  

>>5572
Either way, it's very much a speedlation that skips over all the sound effects, so you're more than welcome to just ignore it and carry on with your own.

>> No.5574  

>>5573

Okay, I will do so, and post them here and on /a/.

>> No.5575  
File: Tae-chan 8.txt -(7665 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

>>5574

Here's chapter 8.

>> No.5606  
File: Tae-chan Chapter 11 Translation.txt -(12230 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

Someone at /u/ was editing this for the past couple chapters, but they've disappeared. I'll the post the translations and raws here in case anyone's interested.

Here's Chapter 11
raws: https://mega.nz/#!zMgTmaYI!MNwRl-_AbeJJ9m6JrYvcHEBkncY2j4RZaUghpmwTv64

>> No.5607  
File: Tae-chan Chapter 12 Translation.txt -(12755 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

And 12:

https://mega.nz/#!2Jh1iQIZ!tgqGNkt6bz7E086qw047VPjVt_cplW8J8UpCQ6FNs-4

>> No.5608  

Never mind, someone else has taken over and the chapters have been released.



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