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337112 No.5321  

One-shot, 16 pages.
http://www.mediafire.com/file/g1deldqs8uryt4w/%5BKodama_Naoko%5D_Shishunki_Medical.rar

Anyone willing to translate this? I can do the editing.

>> No.5322  

For the record, these are Chinese scans.

>> No.5345  

Here are the Japanese ones: http://www.mediafire.com/file/g1deldqs8uryt4w/%5BKodama_Naoko%5D_Shishunki_Medical.rar

Raws by WeatheredPeach.

>> No.5346  

>>5345

I'll translate it.

>> No.5348  
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Here's the translation.

>> No.5349  

>>5348
Page 28, Bottom Panel

>but I've got intention of letting [go you].
>but I've got (no) intention of letting [you go].

I can't read japanese and just used google translator, but I think the "no" is missing, otherwise the context seems off?.

>> No.5350  

>>5349

Oh, oops. Yeah, I apparently screwed that one up when editing.

It should be:

>I've got no intention of letting you go.
>> No.5353  

I'll edit this...

>> No.5355  

>>5353
I was the OP who posted the raws and offered to edit but if you feel like it.

>> No.5356  

>>5355 sorry, sorry, i didn't see it. i'll slowly back out now.

>> No.5357  

>>5356
No, I meant it. If you want to edit this, I wouldn't mind.

>> No.5358  

>>5357 It's alright. You offered first so...

>> No.5384  

>>5348
http://www.mediafire.com/file/bvrne85hzl6e3b8/Shishunki_Medical.rar/

>> No.5385  

>>5384

One major fix, as per >>5350 :

0028.png

But I've got intention of letting go you. -> But I've got no intention of letting you go. (Insert "no," transpose "go" and "you")

On a less significant note, double-check the centering on your text within the bubbles. You've erred on the high side, which is the right side to err on, but I think that probably you could afford to lower some of your text to put it closer to center. The bubbles on 0016.png and 0022.png are fairly good examples of text that looks a little too high to me (probably not more than ~5-10px), though there are other examples scattered about.

>> No.5386  

>>5384

Just two things:

Page 18

Top Right Panel
Text
On ther hand, I don't have any plans at all.
change to
On the other hand, I don't have any plans at all.

Page 19

Top Left Panel
Left Bubble
We had a report?
change to
There was a report due?
>> No.5387  

>>5385
>>5386
http://www.mediafire.com/file/21r4rkv4rx4f70a/Shishunki_Medical_QCv1.rar/

>> No.5388  

>>5387

I think this is good. At least as far as the script goes. I'm not good at judging spacing and such, but it looks fine to me.

>> No.5393  

>>5387
Released.



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