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217806 No.4932  

10 pages. Raws from tamamusi's twitter:
http://www.mediafire.com/download/7u78d18z7h7lw5c/shakaijinyuritmms.zip

translation by me: http://pastebin.com/DFF2pEE8
I can update the pastebin for any fixes if need be.

>> No.4944  
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>>4932
I guess I'll be your editor again. It might take a while because it's 10 pages...

Here's page 1. What do you think?
And there's something untranslated in panel 4 (koko wa)

>> No.4945  
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>>4944
Thanks so much! These are tougher than the single pages, even if there weren't 10 of them, but I'm glad.
Attached file is my notes.

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>>4945

>Though I /am/ doing pretty well for myself, I guess.

Tried emphasizing "am", but that's how far the font can go. We can try all caps or I can find another font?

>> No.4950  

>>4949
Nah, it's good as it is.

>> No.4951  

>>4950
Roger.

>> No.4967  

Except for choosing the fonts, it was not really that difficult. (and I'm also a bit busy)
Credits to be added later once I got the title.
What's our title anyway?

>> No.4968  
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>>4967
Full report coming soon, but
for page 5, how about something like this where they complement the on-screen sfx at a smaller size? I don't know how to typeset in PS so I did this in Aegisub just for an example.

Too bad this is another twitter orphan series from her that don't really have names, just designations. All I can think of for a name right now is 'Company Girls'. Maybe I should try to come up with something better.

>> No.4969  
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qc
The main font fits really well, but a shame how close the T and I get so close to some letters.
My previous post wasn't exactly what your question was on the page. I guess I got a little excited and forgot.

>> No.4970  
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>>4969
thanks!

>The main font fits really well, but a shame how close the T and I get so close to some letters.

I can adjust the tracking like this if you want.

>My previous post wasn't exactly what your question was on the page. I guess I got a little excited and forgot.

No problem. The way you Del-Rey it looks good.

>> No.4971  

You could call it "A Spot of Yuri in the Workforce."

>> No.4972  

I discovered the term 'Skintern' today.
But that's not what Suzune was.
Maybe tamamusi would like a skintern. Or for a manga artist that'd have to be a skinsistant.

>>4970
How I Del-what?
The new tracking is much better thanks.

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>>4972

>Maybe tamamusi would like a skintern. Or for a manga artist that'd have to be a skinsistant.

Yeah, she'd be very inspired to draw more yuri if she had one.

>How I Del-what?

http://scanlationnn.tumblr.com/post/21178914937/every-time-the-font-changes-in-jpn-change-the

I redrew the last bubble on page 4. The problem is its odd shape not the centering.
And is the space between 'Sorry...' and the 'I love you,' already fine?

>> No.4974  

>>4973
yeah, that's good. It gives it that...

pause effect better.

>> No.4976  
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tamamusi finally released these collected on her pixiv, but thankfully I think there is no difference in picture quality. ⑨ and ⑩ aren't in there anyway, but there is an added picture (or maybe I just missed it) that goes after ⑦ that just reads:
ん…
mm...

数ヶ月後
A few months later

>> No.4977  

>>4976
so this will be the new page 7 but if we put this the title of the previous page 8 "The Months Go On" will be a bit redundant

>> No.4978  

>>4977
It's the new page 8, with the ones after becoming 9, 10, and 11.
The titles aren't important because they're only descriptions from twitter and not part of the actual comic anyway, but we could change it to Future Days or something for less redundancy.

>> No.4982  

v2

>> No.4983  

>>4982
The only thing left I can add is some slight English adjustments for the last box on the second page to make it:

>By throwing up, Hashimoto has succeeded in her plan to get each other's clothes off!

Too bad I missed that the first time. And nice work with the sfx on page 5. Since I don't know much about editing, my QC mostly covered making sure the script looks good up in the bubbles, and can't cover the editing side of things in the case it needs some.
Thanks very much. I guess the next step is up to YP?

>> No.4988  

v3(updated text centering and credits page)

>> No.5002  
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Uh oh, she keeps releasing stuff for this
I guess it's about one of these https://retrip.jp/articles/18419/ ?

>寝ながら

We heard there's a planetarium that offers a romantic laying-down-under-the-stars type of experience.

>これいきたーい

I want to go there!

>いーじゃん いこいこー

Sounds good. Let's do it.

>きてみたけど…

So we checked it out.

>冬のオリオンはー

Something about Orion...

>なんか… エロい…

is making me kinda hot.

>むらあああ…っ

(sfxxx for being turned on, only suggestion I have is: *turned on

>> No.5003  
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Who else is getting turned on?
(I don't think I get it)

>> No.5004  
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should I include this or that's like an extra we can release after the first zip?

>>5003
hmmm, how about this image (check out page 7, panel 6)?

>> No.5007  

>>5004
I'd say the latter. There's no guarantee she won't release another page at any given time, and it certainly does feel like an extra after the conclusion.

>(check out page 7, panel 6)

なるほど

>> No.5008  

released~ \o/
https://yuriproject.net/company_girls/

thank you for your hard work guys!

>> No.5020  
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I'm not sure if I should bump or not, but I'll just quietly collect further images here just in case.

隣に…
Hello, I'm Hashimoto. I just moved in next door.
妻です。
This is my wife.
妻です。
And this is my wife.

>> No.5142  
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>> No.5175  
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>>5002
Here you go.
Sorry for the delay. orz

>>5142
Thanks for helping out fellow anon! o(^^o)



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