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735540 No.412  

http://www.mediafire.com/?w9me5cdr71x4222

20p one-shot by Nanzaki Iku.

>> No.424  

I want to edit it! Nanzaki Iku FTW!

>> No.1182  

This looks good

>> No.2670  

Will someone translate this oneshot? I'd like to edit it if CaptainVonCookie is absent.

>> No.3140  

>>424

>> No.4441  

Okay, I'll give the translation a go.

>> No.4452  
File: A Mutually Predacious Relationship translation.txt -(12968 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

And here's the translation.

Feel free to tweak any sound effects in particular as necessary.

>> No.4468  

Thank you will edit I am a big fan of this guys work ^^;

>> No.4755  

>>412
Still showing as "needs translator." Should be listed as "in editing."

>> No.4764  

Has this been edited at all yet?

>> No.4768  

>>4764
It's been claimed, but no work's been done. Also, it's still showing as needing a translator. Admin(s)?

>> No.4780  

seeing as how this isn't edited yet, i think i'll give this one a shot

>> No.4782  
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728049

k so here's my work on page 2 just to prove im working on this lol if someone can qc it that would be gr8 <3

>> No.4783  
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need help translating. "色々厳しいケドね" was left untranslated in the script

>> No.4784  

>>4783
Earlier on that page:

>私も頑張らないとなあって
>I wonder what'll happen to me if I don't keep up.

It's motivating me to work harder, too.

>色々厳しいケドね
>

It'll be tough, though.

>> No.4785  

>>4782

http://puu.sh/jCccJ/d66bf78e87.png

http://scanlationnn.tumblr.com/post/21591789406/heres-a-visual-representation-of-the-invisible

http://prettyanonymo.us/index.php/scanlation-resources/anonblacks-typesetting-guide/typesetting-102-more-skills/

>> No.5066  

I'll edit this. :)

>> No.5069  

>>5066 Still in wrong category.

>> No.5070  

>>5066 sounds awesome really wanted it to get edited.

>> No.5126  

>>4452 translation is confusing... instead of jap charachters i see
‘ŠŒÝ•ßHƒŠƒŒƒVƒ‡ƒ“
what should i do?

>> No.5127  
File: Predacious_UTF8.txt -(15244 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

>>5126
It has to be re-encoded from SJIS. Try this attached file.

>> No.5129  

>>5127 Thanks! How did you re-encode this?

>> No.5130  

>>5129
iconv (but there are probably easier tools for Windows). BTW the browser and some text editors can display SJIS as well if you look for an "Encoding" setting.

>> No.5136  

https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B-NAcy6fcWxoZ0hXQkgyajR3RE0
pg 1, there's something untranslated or maybe i missed it. :)

>> No.5138  

>>5136
page 1:
アハハ = Ahaha

You mean My RUI? =>
Trying to claim she's "Your RUI"?!

page 4:
...Bo-ring. =>
...Boring-meow.

page 5:
You've been poring over them a while now, too. =>
You're looking at them like they're totally normal!

page 7:
Did you really want me to upset me that much? ->
Did you want me to be upset that much?

page 10:
But that's still fine. =>
That would be nice.

page 11:
I was thinking before =>
I was thinking about how I would have reacted in the past.

what if I could've given you the response you really wanted, Rui? =>
The me from then would have given you that jealous response you were hoping for, Rui.

page 12:
I'm jealous of all of them. ->
I'd be jealous of all of them.

Now, / that part of you that you won't let anyone else see, =>
Goodness, / I probably would've preferred to not let anyone else see you at all!

Rui... / I wonder where you're hiding it. =>
And I'd / lock you up somewhere to keep you to myself.

I want you so badly right now. =>
That's how greedy I am.

You're still a total child, / still so self-indulgent. =>
I'm still totally childish, / and selfish.

page 13:
What have you done to me, all of a sudden =>
What I might suddenly be capable of...

I don't understand =>
even I....

any of what I'm feeling / do you? =>
don't quite know... / get it?

page 14:
sfx スル... = Slide...

and from past the line you hide behind =>
to break your boundaries, and...

all of you I know =>
all those things I wanted to see,

right to me. =>
I can see directly.

page 15:
You're thinking about / how it's all coming out, aren't you? =>
It's exactly / what you're hoping for, right?

That's almost impressive. =>
It's impressive,

You've really started to enjoy this. =>
how much you've made me look forward to this.

page 16:
These 10 dialogue bubbles of You-chan:

  1. Just like this
  2. other people

...
10. I'll go harder
=>

  1. Other people
  2. will never
  3. trace your body like this
  4. or hear your loud moans
  5. and your passion,
  6. only I
  7. will experience
  8. everything that is "Rui".
  9. So I should
  10. at least...

page 17:

  1. be okay with
  2. them seeing a little bit of "RUI".
  3. Or else,
  4. I might get cursed.

page 18:

  1. I was
  2. being so honest with you.

page 19:
empty bubble うん... = Yes...

page 20:
You're leaving me all tied up like this... =>
You're leaving me here like this...?

You were delicious. =>
Since you were delicious, too.

Isn't it fine if we're both cute and cool =>
Can't we both be cute and cool brides?

>> No.5141  

https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B-NAcy6fcWxoQ2NNY2NsT0piY0U

>> No.5143  

>>5141
On page 11, panel 1 the SFX is missing (the Japanese is already erased): フラ フラ - Wobble Wobble

Also on panel 3: サラ - Flutter

Page 14
Oops, You's last sentence doesn't work here.

Out will come, / all those things I wanted to see, / I can see directly. =>
I can / directly experience what I want / by myself.

Page 18
For better flow:

I was / being honest with you. =>
I / was being honest with you.

>> No.5144  

>>5143
https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B-NAcy6fcWxoNTc1SHlvVGhkRnc

>> No.5145  

>>5144
Thanks. Released.



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