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488390 No.3875  

if anyone would like to translate this I'll edit in the text (I use ps) http://exhentai.org/s/bfef449e53/701021-49

>> No.3882  

I'm from /a/'s daily japanese thread so I cannot guarantee that my translation will be 100% accurate. I am still learning.

Here goes anyway.

>>3875

  1. 私は昔からよくかわいいって言われてきた

I've always been told I'm cute.

2. 読者モデルだってしたことある
毎日食事や運動にも気を遣っている
A fashion model or something like that.
Every day I focus on what I eat and exercise.

3. あ 志麻ちゃん
志麻ちゃんだー そんな私の夢はー
Oh, Shima-chan.
Shima-chan...
My dream is...

4. いやーん おねーさま ちょーきょうと
Wow! Big sister, you're so cute!
おねーさま? 同じ年だよ。
Big sister? We're in the same year.
え…え…ありがとう…
Umm, thanks...

5. 人気者のアイドルになることー
(continued from [3] to become a popular person idol)
志麻ちゃん水着も似合うね
Shima-chan, our swim suits match!
そうかな?
Oh, yeah?
うんうん!すごくかわいいよー
Yeah! It's so cute!

6. それにしても先生遅いねー
Man, our teacher sure is late...

もう10分経つよ
Class started ten minutes ago!

7. みんなー 先生遅れるってー 来るまで自習だってー
Everyone! Since the teacher is late, we'll have to teach ourselves!

>> No.3883  

It's certainly presentable for typesetting, so there's no problem there. Maybe others can make suggestions as you translate more.

>> No.3884  
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>>3882

  1. どうしたの? その水着

What's with that swimsuit?

えへへー放課後市営プールに行こうと思って持ってきてたんだ
先生来るまで着てようかなーって
Hehehe....I brought it to wear to the municipal pool after school.
I guess I'll wear it until the teacher comes back.

2. 先生来たら…
If the teacher comes back...

あー大丈夫 大丈夫
Oh, it's okay.

先生ゲーム買いに行ったみたいだししばらくかかるよ
It seems like the teacher went to go videogame shopping, which takes a while...

でもいいね その水着
But it's good, right? That swimsuit!

ほんとすごくかわいいよ
It's truly the cutest!

えへへ そう?
Hehe...really?

な…なによ そんな水着
ここは学校で決まってる水着で勝負するとこじゃない…
私だってそういうの着れば…

What's with that swimsuit...
This is a school, not a swimsuit competition...
If I dressed that way...

>> No.3885  
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  1. どうしたのそれ? 下着じゃん

え…うん
水着忘れちゃって
あーなるほどー

What...that's not underwear is it?
Uh...yeah.
I forgot my swimsuit.
Ahh...I see.

2. んーでもいいよね。
下着で泳ぐのもアリだねー
あはは
そーかな

Hmm, it's still OK I guess.
You can still swim in your underwear.
Hahaha.
Of course!

いや けっこうかわいいよ
Well, it's still pretty cute!

3. ありゃー みんなこっち来ませんね
やっぱ違ったカッコしてると目立ちますねー
それがなきゃおねーさまの方がいいのに
う…うん…ありがとう…
Hmm...no one's coming over here, huh?
It's because we're so uncool...
Anyway, I'm glad to be here with big sister.
Uh...thanks.

4. おねーさま
このまま放っておくのはマズいんじゃないでしょうか
まずい?
Big sister!
Leaving things as they are is disgusting, isn't it?
Disgusting?

5. あの子たち人気も今だけだとは思いますが…もしかしたら親おねーさま派から寝返る者も現れかねません
I think those girls are only popular for now...one day big sister will change sides and join them!

ですのでここで誰が一番美しく人気があるのかみんなに再確認されるんです
Then everyone will re-evaluate who is the #1 popular girl!

で…でも…どうやって…
But...how will we do that...?

>> No.3886  
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>>3885

  1. はだかになるんです

By going naked!

はっ…はだかか!?
Naked!?

2. 古来多くの芸術家が女性の裸体をモチーフとした作品をたくさん残してきたように
It is a time honored tradition for artists to feature nude women in their art...

女性の肉体はこの世で最も美しいものなのです
The flesh of a woman is the most beautiful thing in the world!

3. そんな肉体を持つ女性の中でも群を抜いて美しいおねーさま
The beauty of their naked flesh makes some women stand out from the rest of the crowd, big sister!

その裸体は間違いなくアートなのです
Your naked body is most assuredly art!

そ…そう?
R-really?

あのような水着を纏わなければ注目されない彼女たちとは格が違います
The belief that if you didn't put on that kind of swimsuit, those girls wouldn't have noticed you is wrong!

それを証明してやりましょう
We're going to prove it!

あんな水着の所為でおねーさまの権威が失墜してもいいんですか
Your bathing suit is ruining your appeal!

誰にも振り向いてもらえなくなりますよ
Because of it, no one notices you!

うっ…それは…
Uh...that's...

4. で…でも…裸になるなんて…
But, if you get undressed...

あーもうじれったい
This is so frustrating!

そんなコトくらいなんです
That's enough of this!

5. 私も一緒に脱ぎますよ
We'll get undressed together!

えっ…!?
What!?

それなら恥ずかしくないでしょう?
Will that take away your embarrassment?

>> No.3887  

Could "古来多くの芸術家が女性の裸体をモチーフとした作品をたくさん残してきたように" be translated differently? "Time-honored" I think could be replaced with "since ancient times" (obv. not in the same location of the translated text) but that's up to the typesetter.

You have "このまま放っておくのはマズいんじゃないでしょうか" as "Leaving things as they are is disgusting, isn't it?" Can you elaborate?

>> No.3888  

>>3887

>古来

Sure, it could also be "since ancient times". Doesn't matter.

>>3887

>You have "このまま放っておくのはマズいんじゃないでしょうか" as "Leaving things as they are is disgusting, isn't it?" Can you elaborate?

She means that leaving the current situation as it is, in relation to the cliques at her school of who is popular and who isn't, is "disgusting". マズい actually has plenty of translations, "unappealing", "unpleasant", etc.

>> No.3889  
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  1. ほら別になんてことありませんよ!

Look! There's nothing else like this!

さあ おねーさまも
Come on big sister!

あ…
Um...

2. わあ どうしたの?
Huh, why?

なんで裸に?
Why is she naked?

え?
Huh?

暑いから?
Because it's hot, maybe?

あ いいね 気持ちよさそう
Hm, looks to me like it feels good.

あ…
W-wait...

樹菜乃ちゃん スラッとしててかわいいんだね
Wow, Kinano-chan! You're so thin! Cute!

い…いやー
He-heh...

樹菜乃ちゃん すごーい
Kinano-chan is amazing!

度胸あるー
What bravery!

あっはっは
Ahaha!

3. ふー あつい あつい
Ahh...it's so hot...

>> No.3890  
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>>3889
そーだね
水着なんて無くても全然いいよね
It's true! Not wearing a swimsuit is great!

あ…あはは この方が気持ちいいよ
Ah...hehe. This feels really good.

し…志麻ちゃん…
Sh-shima-chan...

2. きゃーおねーさまステキー
Wow, big sister is so cool!

ほ…ほんとー
R-really?

3. いつもキレイだけどやっぱり裸もキレイなんだね…
You're always pretty, but as I thought you're way prettier naked!

そ…そうかなあ
If you say so...

そーだよ そーだよ
It's true, really!

見とれちゃうよ
I can't look away!

4. いいなー かわいくて
ほんと うらやましい
She's so cute it makes me jealous!

[Note the font change here]
もっと言って もっと言って
Keep talking!!

5. おねーさま
Big sister...

はあ はあ
(masturbation noises)

>> No.3892  
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>>3885

  1. き…樹菜乃ちゃん…な…何してるのおお!?

Ki-Kinano-chan, what are you doing!?

わ…分からないけど…気持ちよくて…
I...I don't know, but it feels good...

気持ちいい!?
It feels good!?

2. おねーさまや…きれな人みながらこここすると…
Big sister...rub here while looking at them...

すっごく気持ちよくなるんです
It will feel really good...

3. こ…ここ?
H-here?

うん
Yeah

そこのワレメのとこ
Right on your cunt

[TL NOTE: I think みな is a contraction of みんな, this sentence seems a bit odd though.]
いじくってみなよ
Everyone, finger yourselves!

う…うん…
O-okay...

4. あっ…あっ… ほ…ほんとだ…
Ahhh...ahhhh... it's true...

なにこれなんか感じる
What is this feeling?

すごいピクンピクンするよ
It feels so funny!

5. こ…これでいいの? これでいいのかな…?
Is...is here okay? Am I doing it right?

うん いいよ
Yes, perfect.

何か感じる?
What are you feeling?

う…うん…感じるけど…
U-uh...I'm feeling...

>> No.3893  
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>>3892

  1. な…なんかヘンな感じる

W-what an odd feeling...

えへへ いいのいいの そのまま続けて
Hehehe...you're doing good, keep going just like that.

そのうちすごくよくなってくるから
Sooner or later it'll feel good!

おねーさま
Big sister

はっ…はい…
Y-yes...

おねーさまのワレメよく見えるように聞いてもらえます?
Big sister, may I please get a better look at your cunt?

えっ…う…うん…
Uh...sure, I guess...

2. こっ…これでいい?
Can...can you see better now?

わぁお
Wow!

すっ…スゴい最高ーです おねーさま!!
Wow...that's the best I've ever seen, big sister!!

3. なんてきれいなピンク色!
What a nice pink color!

おねーさまは中身もとってもきれいなんですね!!
The inside of big sister's vagina is beautiful too!

4. ほんとだ… 志麻ちゃん見ながらいじってると…
It's true...looking at Shima-chan while fingering myself...

なんかすごくドキドキしてくるよう
is making my heart pound like never before!

でしょ でしょ
I know, I know!

>> No.3894  
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>>3893
な…なんかじれったい
H-how frustrating!

もう脱ご
Get undressed then!

そうだね 私も脱ぐ
You're right. I'll get undressed too!

ねえちくびも結構いいよ
Hmm, nipples are fun too...

ほんとー?
Really?

あっほんと!
Yes, really!

わぁ なんかここぬれてる
My hands are getting so wet!

私も
Mine too!

お…おねーさま...
B-big sister...

わ…私…もう…
I...I'm...already...

ど…どうしたの、樹菜乃ちゃん?
W-what's wrong, Kinano-chan?

>> No.3895  
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>>3894
樹菜乃ちゃん
Kinano-chan...

だ…だいじょうぶ?
A-are you okay?

う…うん
Y-yeah.

さ…最高に気持ち良かったです
That...was the best feeling ever.

おねーさま...
Big sister...

なにこれ なにこれ
What am I feeling?

なんかくる なんかくるうう
I'm cumming...

ヤ…ヤバい…こんなのヤバいよおおお
Holy fuck, this is awesome!!!

>> No.3896  

Should I continue translating? Typeset pages are nowhere to be found. Is anyone even interested in this?

>> No.3897  

>>3894

>わぁ なんかここぬれてる
>My hands are getting so wet!

Derp, this should be "I'm getting so wet"...

>> No.3898  

>>3896
Yes, I check on the thread daily, it's just that I'm slightly busy at the moment. I'll typeset the first page tomorrow.

>> No.3903  
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Here's the first image. I didn't typeset in the parts that require me to edit out text from the background (rather than just erase text from textbubbles), but I will do so. I'm just posting this as is to show that I'm still willing to edit.

>> No.3904  

>>3903
Cool, I'll keep going, there's not much left. I also understand if you think my translation is not good and that's why you want to hold off, I've only been studying for a year. However I think this text is pretty easy and I doubt anyone else is going to help.

>> No.3905  

>>3904
I'm not holding off because of your translation, I think it's fine. I can't really vouch for its accuracy or inaccuracy anyway,

>> No.3917  
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>>3895

>なんかくる なんかくるうう
>I'm cumming...

Another correction, this should be "Something's coming/happening". I asked for help because this line confused me and くる cannot mean "cum" in any circumstance. Pretty cute that she doesn't know she's about to orgasm.

On with the translation.

すごい!! なんか体がびくーんってしたよ
Wow!! Her body is spasming!

大丈夫?気持ちいいの?
Are you okay? Does it feel good?

おねーさまもしてみてください
Try as well, big sister!

う…うん…なんか…いい…
Y-yeah...it's good...

すごく気持ちいいですから…
で…でも…
みんなもしてますし みんなの裸見ながら やれる機会もそうないですよ
It feels really good, but...
There's not a chance I could while looking at everyone doing that naked!

それなら私が…
Well, in that case I'll...

ちょ…ちょっと樹菜乃ちゃん…
W-wait a minute Kinano-chan!

だいじょうぶです うまくやりますから
It's okay, I'll be careful! (lit: I'll do it well/skillfully)

おねーさまはただ感じていてください
Big sister, let me just help you experience it!

もう…しょうがない 誰かおねーさまおさえて
It can't be helped. Someone hold her down.

ええっ!?
What!?

うん いいよー
Yeah, okay!

ああ…だ…ダメ…
Stop it!

いじっちゃダメええ
Stop fingering me!

まあまあ
Calm down

>> No.3918  
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みんなを見てください
Everyone, watch!

どうです あの嬉しそうな顔
Wow, she looks so happy...

みんなおねーさまを求めているんです
Everyone wants to be like big sister

おねーさまはみんなのアイドルになったんです
Big sister has become everyone's idol!

わ…私が…
I...i'm an...

ア…アイドル…
i...idol...

そうです
You are.

おねーさまはみんなの憧れなんです
Everyone longs to be you right now.

おねーさまの顔からだ声その仕草
Big sister's face, body, voice and behavior

みんなおねーさまのように なりたいと思って おねーさまを見てるんです
By looking at big sister, everyone is thinking that they want to become like her!

私に…
Like me...

>> No.3919  
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そんなみんな いえ私達の喜びがわかりますか?
Do you now see everyone's joy -- our joy, rather?

私たちと同じところをおねーさまに見つけることです
We all discovered this in the same place, with big sister.

おねーさまにも私たちと同じトコロがあるって
We were all with big sister, you said?

だ…ダメえええ…
St-stop it...

私たちと同じように感じて
We all felt it together.

乱れていって
Our various orgasms

そんないやらしいことが大好きだって
We all loved doing such lewd things.

そ…そんなこと舐めないでぇぇぇ
D-don't lick me there!

知りたいんです
I want to know.

ダメ…ダメ…
Quit it!

がまんできないいい
I can't endure this!

しなくていいです
You don't need to do this

からだが感じるままいっちゃってください
Let me make your body orgasm!

おもいっきり
I can't resist anymore...

はっ…はじける…はじけるぅぅぅ
I'm going to burst!!!

>> No.3920  
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はかあああ あふぇあああ

>> No.3921  
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はあ はあ はあ
(panting noises)

どうです おねーさま
スゴく気持ちいいでしょう?
How was it big sister? It was great, wasn't it?

嬉しいです
おしっこもらす程感じてもらえて
I'm so happy, I made her feel so good that she squirted.

おねーさまも私たちと同じ大好きなんですね
Big sister definitely liked it as much as we did!

じゃあ…
Well then...

もっと楽しみましょう
Let's have some more fun!

あ…あ…
Uh, um...

もっと もっと…
More fun...

何度も 何度も
Over and over...

さっきの感じ味わいたいでしょ?
Do you want to do it again?

あっ…あっ…
Uh...uh...

やりまくりましょう♥
Let's keep going ♥

動けなくなるまで…
Until you can't move...

いいなー
Okay?

>> No.3922  
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>>3921
私も志麻ちゃんとそれしたい
I want to do that with Shima-chan too!

私ともして
Me too!

えーじゃあ私も
Yes, me too!

私もしたい
Me too

私も志麻ちゃんとそれしたい
I want to do that with Shima-chan too!

志麻ちゃん好き
I like Shima-chan

私 志麻ちゃんと舐め合いたい
I want to lick Shima-chan too!

私もここいじりあったりしたいよ
I want to finger her too!

み…みんな…
E-everyone...

い…いいよ
Yes...

みんなとする…
Everyone can try...

全員とやるよぉ
The whole class can do it!

やった
Yay!

わ…よかった 早くしてね
Let's go, quickly!

その頃先生はー
Meanwhile, back to the teacher

みんなのアイドルだもんね
Because of everyone's idol, huh...

ゲームを買って帰る途中事故に遭っていた
On his way back from buying the game, he had an accident...

おわり
END

>> No.3923  

Good job.

I will start typesetting the rest of the pages. Should be done by the end of the month.

>> No.3924  

I apologize for not being able to give this a more thorough proofread, but a few errors stood out to me, so I gave it a quick scan.

>>3889

>1.ほら別になんてことありませんよ!
>Look! There's nothing else like this!

"Look! It's no big deal!"
なんてこと=Something terrible/shocking.

>>3892

>[TL NOTE: I think みな is a contraction of みんな, this sentence seems a bit odd though.]

This is an abbreviation of みなさい. Your translation works as it is though.

>>3885

>やっぱ違ったカッコしてると目立ちますねー
>It's because we're so uncool...

"Dressing differently sure does make you stand out."
違ったカッコ=Different appearance.

>>3892

>何か感じる?
>What are you feeling?

"Are you feeling something?"
何か not 何が.

>う…うん…感じるけど…
>U-uh...I'm feeling...

"Y- Yeah... I am..."

>>3917

>やれる機会もそうないですよ
>There's not a chance I could

"That's not an opportunity that comes along often."

>>3922

>私 志麻ちゃんと舐め合いたい
>I want to lick Shima-chan too!

This translation is probably okay, but 合い attached to a verb stem indicates the action is being performed mutually.

>> No.3926  

>>3924

>This translation is probably okay, but 合い attached to a verb stem indicates the action is being performed mutually.

How would the text be modified?

>> No.3928  

>>3926
I don't know, maybe something like "I want us to go down on each other"?
Like I said, the original translation was acceptable.

>> No.3945  

Making progress, up to page 48.

>>3919
I don't really understand the first few lines of this, like "We were all with big sister, you said?"

>> No.3946  

>>3945

>そんなみんな いえ私達の喜びがわかりますか?
>Do you now see everyone's joy -- our joy, rather?

I would lose the "now." It seems more like she's asking if she's capable of experiencing the same thing as the rest of them.

>私たちと同じところをおねーさまに見つけることです
>We all discovered this in the same place, with big sister.

"I'm seeing if big sister has the same spot as the rest of us."

The next several phrases all belong with the 知りたいんです at the end. These are all things she wants to know.

>おねーさまにも私たちと同じトコロがあるって
>We were all with big sister, you said?

"Do you have the same spot as us?"

>私たちと同じように感じて
>We all felt it together.

"Do you feel it the same as us?"

>乱れていって
>Our various orgasms

"Does it drive you crazy?"

>そんないやらしいことが大好きだって
>We all loved doing such lewd things.

"Do you love doing such lewd things?"

>知りたいんです
>I want to know.
>> No.3947  

>>3946
If there's any other suggestions you could make to the text, that'd be welcome since... I'm typesetting.

>> No.3952  

>>3947
I'm afraid I don't have time to give this a thorough QC, but if you encounter additional dialogue that sounds strange to you, I can look at those specific parts.

>> No.3974  

Hey, I'm up to page 51. Progress has been slow due to being busy with IRL stuff.

>> No.4036  

Should be done by the end of this month.

>> No.4427  

I've been told that another translator will be going over the translations given in this thread and improving on them. I'll work on this afterwards.

>> No.4438  

I'm not familiar with posting on a message board so I'm posting a link to the docx file I worked on instead. http://waa.ai/48rn

I'll check back on this thread so if any problem with the translation comes up, please ask away.

>> No.4446  

>>4438
Thanks. I vow to get it done by the end of the month.



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