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2363007 No.2074  

First chapter (I assume), 16 pages.

ED: http://www.mediafire.com/?py81cm8y9b798vi

>> No.2324  
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Translation.

>> No.2961  

I'm editing this...

It's quite strange, but I'm very happy I checked here! Long story short, I've been working on cleaning these for a little while without having any idea of their source.

I was almost done with that, so I'll probably start typesetting tonight. Should be ready for QC in a few days.

>> No.3424  

Is there a second chapter for this by any chance? Or is it just a one shot?

>> No.3429  
File: Aya Yuri Vol 2_0071.png -(2110927 B, 1767x2494) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.
2110927

There second chapter, I have it, but the RAW. Anyone is encouraged to translate?

>> No.3430  

>>3429 Since Procyon already did Ch01, I'm sure they will translate the second one too? ^^

>> No.3431  

>>3429
Feel free to make threads for those by the way. There's already one up for the first story of Aya Yuri volume 2. Check the wiki thread list.

>>3430
Yeah, of course, but I'd like to see this one edited first.

>> No.3432  

If you need anyone to translate, I can do it too if needed by looking at the raws.
I don't know how to edit it into the manga, but I can always do some translation.

>> No.3434  

>>3432 Ok, here is the link to download the second chapter.

PNG Raw: http://www.mediafire.com/download/94e9jainq06w9dd

I tried to open a topic to post here the link, but I'm new and my English is not very good. Sorry if I make a mistake.

>> No.3435  
File: Aya Yuri Vol 2 Translation.txt -(10883 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

Here's the translation for I May to U

>> No.3436  

>>0071
12月某日とあるカフェー
One day in December at some café
うわ カタカナばっかで写真が少ない…!
Ehh So much katakana and there aren’t that many pictures…!
決まった?
Have you decided?
あ、本日のランチで
Oh, umm… today’s lunch special
私は…
I would like the…
先生と二人だけで会っている
Sensei and I are on a date
こういうところ家族とも来たことない
I have not even been to this kind of place with my family
にしても…
Speaking of which…
雫が神おろしてるの久しぶりに見たな  夏のプール以来
It’s been a while since I’ve seen you wear your hair down Shizuku Ever since swimming season
えっ
Huh?
うん…可愛い
Yep… So Cute
やっぱり大人っぽい服買えばよかったかな…
I wonder if I should have bought more mature looking clothes…
変な感じ
What a strange feeling
服とか髪とかちょっと違うだけで
Just with a different hairstyle and fashion
あ、表にカワイイ犬―
Oh, a cute dog outside
そっか  
Oh, right
こっちが先生の『普段』なんだよね
This is what sensei “usually” looks like
わーありがとう
Oh, Thank you

>> No.3437  

>>0072 
んー!美味しいね
Mmm! It’s delicious isn’t it?
うん
Yeah
そういえば、なんかバック大きいね
Hey, you’re bag looks pretty big
友達と勉強するって言ってきたから
I told them I was going to study with some friends
じゃー今日は遊ぼう遊ぼう
I see I see. Well let’s have fun today then
食べたらどこにいく?
Where do you want to go after we eat?
私も…今日は…
Today… I am going to…
えっ?
What?
>>0073
デート…?
A date…?
わ…何年ぶりに聞いた言葉だろう  
Wow… It’s been years since I’ve heard that word
こっちおいでよー
Come over here
もちろん   嬉しいな遠野産からそう言ってくれるなんて
Of course It makes me so happy that you were the one to invite me Touno-san
来週の日曜とか空いてますか?
Are you available next Sunday?
大丈夫よ
Yes, that’s fine
冬休みだからあまり生徒が行かない所がいいね
Since it’s winter break, we should probably go to a place where not many students go
なに?
What?
可愛い…なぁって
I was just thinking how cute you were
…じゃ もう帰るから!
Uh Umm… Well I am going to get going now!
うん また明日ね
Okay See you tomorrow

>> No.3438  

>>0074
よし これで先生と学校以外で会える点
Alright Now I can see sensei outside of school
あの日 両思いになった時から
That day Since we became lovers
だ だめだってば! 教室だよ ここ!
You, you can’t! We’re in the classroom!
まだ誰か来るかも…っ! 
Someone might still come…!
うん だから
Yes, I know. That’s why
っ…!
Ah…!
手ちょっと繋ぐだけ
I’m just going to hold your hand for a little bit
~~~~っ       
………
でさ――――
And then….
離れて! 
Get away!
何もしないよー
I’m not going to do anything…
ずっと先生のこと避けてるみたいになっちゃってるし
It’s like I’ve been avoiding sensei
ごちそうさまでした
Thanks for lunch
どういたしまして
You’re welcome  
ちょっと歩こうか
Shall we walk around a little?
先生は私にとって大事な人だから
Sensei is a really special person to me
>>0075
今日は自分からちゃんと…!
Today I need to tell her…!
ギャハハッ 
Hahahaha
ありえねー
No way, you’re kidding
あれ?
Huh?
どうかした?
Did you need something?
ううん  なんでもない
N,no… it’s… nothing
時間あるんだし   もっと楽しまないと
No need to rush it, I still have plenty of time I need to enjoy the date
高っ   
So expensive…
わー お給料何ヶ月ぶんだろー
Wow… I wonder how many months’ worth of pay that would cost me
おいしい…
Yum…
…あと少し
….Almost
結構歩いたね   冷えてきた
We walked quite a bit It’s getting cold
先生?  
Sensei?
…ごめん 何?
….Oh, sorry. Did you need something?
…行こ  そろそろ時間だし
…Let’s go It’s almost time anyways

>> No.3439  

>>0076
…うん
….Okay
先生の手冷たい
Sensei’s hands are so cold
今日は楽しかったね  ありがとう
Today was a lot of fun Thank you so much
だめだ
I have to…
もっと先生に近づかないと
I have to get closer to sensei
家こっち方面だよね?
Your house is in this direction, right?
私帰るなんて言ってないよ
I never said I was going home
でも雫 時間って
But Shizuku you said it was time to…
先生の家行きたい  
I want to go to sensei’s place
やっぱり先生に迷惑だったかな
I wonder if it was bothersome for sensei
>>0077
上がって せまいけど 
Come on in even though it’s a little cramped
そうだ 雫の家の門限は…
Oh yes. Shizuku, what time is your curfew….?

あれ?
Huh?
なんで…何もしてこないの?
Why…. Why won’t you do anything?
うん…実は最近ね…
Well… Recently…
ちょっと自身がなくなってきちゃったの…
I’ve sort of lost confidence with myself…
>>0078
私の知らない雫がまだいて
There’s still a part of Shizuku that I don’t know
すぐ焦りそうになる自分が嫌なの
And I hate myself for being so anxious at rushing things
雫には嫌われたくない
I don’t want you to hate me Shizuku
は…?何それ?
Wha… What are you saying?
学校の外で雫と今日ずっと一緒にいて
I was out on a date all today with Shizuku
キスしたいとかそんなことばっかり考えてたの
And all I could think about was how much I wanted to kiss you and hold you and do all sorts of things with you
…っ それは…
Umm… That’s…
雫に合わせなきゃって思うのに…
I need to go at Shizuku’s pace, I know that…
それでも雫はホントにいい? 雫の気持ち聞きたいの…
Are you okay with that Shizuku? I want to hear what you feel about it…
…今日言おうとしてたのに…
….I, I tried to tell you all day…
だからその…そういうことした時に
So… Umm… I … Umm… want to…
えっ 雫?
Eh? Shizuku?

>> No.3440  
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>> No.3441  

Sorry guys for posting so many stuff
Ignore the copy and pasted ones and the first text I put up there
It turns out there was a weird merge formatting problem

I got it fixed now though and the latest one that I posted up there should be just fine
Hope it helps

>> No.3443  

>>3440 thanks for your effort!

>> No.4221  

Mine.

>> No.4247  

Oh Aoko, how little I missed your 500 PornFX scribbles per sex scene.

http://uqc.me/lch57

  • red stroked text means I still have to redraw the background once the text is finalized.
  • pg 8: The sfx in the first two panels are translated as shudder, which I believe is incorrect, given the context.
>> No.4252  

Page 1, panel 4, "Darn, the teacher's here" - tick down.

Page 3, panel 3, "Toono-san, you saw it, right?" - down perhaps half a text row.
Panel 6, punctuation would probably look better as such -

>...Even if I did, it has Not. A. Thing. To do with me.

The formulation feels a bit awkard though. I'd try

> ...Even if I did, it doesn't have a. Single. Thing. To do with me.

Page 4, the letters seem thinner, if you've forgotten to apply a "Strong" text setting or something.

Page 8, panel 3, "Not like anyone would believe it, though. And, there's no evidence."
Panel 5, "Why did she say she liked me?" - you can move "did" back up next to "Why" and get a more compact text shaping.
Last panel, shouldn't "I just don't get it!" and "I don't get it!" switch places?

Page 12, panel 7, "in a weird spot" -> "in such a weird place". (For best reading flow, I think simply "Don't touch me /there!/" would sound the best, though that's up to you)

Page 14, panel 6, "That feels good!" tick down a few steps.

Page 15, last box, "Sensei... Me too", tick down.

>> No.4255  

>>4252
Thanks.

>Page 4, the letters seem thinner

Because it's a flashback. Yes, I know about the first bubble on the next page that's still flashback but has the normal font.

>> No.4271  

>>4247

>pg 8: The sfx in the first two panels are translated as shudder, which I believe is incorrect, given the context.

Yeah, it's "Stomp Stomp"

>Not like anyone would believe it and there's no evidence.
>Page 8, panel 3, "Not like anyone would believe it, though. And, there's no evidence."

No she thinks it's harmless, so you could write it as:
I may as well try it since it's not very plausible and there's no evidence, so it won't cause any real harm.

>> No.4334  

>>4271

>>4271
So, do we stick with "Not like anyone would believe it and there's no evidence."? I'm not sure whether

> I may as well try it since it's not very plausible and there's no evidence, so it won't cause any real harm.

was supposed to be a clarification or a replacement because it's a bit verbose for the latter.

>> No.4335  

>>4334
I think the original is good.

>> No.4345  

Just a notice that I'm not going to work on the sequel, I'm getting really tired of the yuri fan dumb at the moment.

Seira's script doesn't have SFX so this should be trivial for anyone anyway. I'll supply a font list in case someone cares enough.

>> No.4346  

>>4345

Hope someone does, I am looking forward for the second part.

>> No.4445  

Hello! Thank you for scanlating chapter 1!

I like this manga and I wanted to help out... I've never worked on scanlations before but I tried cleaning the raws from Onion-san and used the translations by Seira-san. I added some that I thought might help.

I hope this will be useful (><)

http://www.mediafire.com/download/0d3vllaj2moikgs/I_May_To_U.zip

>> No.4448  

>>4445
Nice work on chapter 2 but you forgot the credits page.

Also, I think it needs more sfx translation. I hope someone can anyone add to it.

>> No.4456  

>>4445
It's missing punctuation, but I suppose it's okay. Same for using a character's name instead of 'you'.
You cleaned several bubbles without putting in the text. Like on page 19, top left, やあああ - Aaah! You should definitely fix those since you already did half the work. I think most of them are ん - Nnmm!

>>4448

>I think it needs more sfx translation

Would be nice, but it's not crucial.

Page 1
Speaking of which… =>
By the way...

Page 2
you’re bag looks pretty big =>
your bag looks pretty big

Page 3
It makes me so happy that you were the one to invite me Touno-san =>
It makes me so happy that you would invite me Touno-san

Page 5
Did you need something? =>
Something wrong?

Page 15
She's... so tight =>
She's... clamping down on me

Page 16
Even if you tell me to stop, I won't =>
Even if you told me to stop, I wouldn't

>> No.4462  

https://www.mediafire.com/?nrx3td82qj42jqs

>>4456
-Added missing text
-Did the edits on the lines as suggested

>>4448
-Added credits

>> No.4720  

>>4462
Hi, Kisatou, are you still around?

thank you for helping out, and sorry for checking this only now. Regarding your edit, I think we need to improve it a bit more( i.e. cropping, typsetting, redraws) before it can be released...

>> No.5011  

Did some nsfw... Hope you guys don't mind. It's my first time so go easy on me. Ehehe
https://www.dropbox.com/sh/m52y6lklir202h7/AAB7im0TRJUKfpQq4wnPiB4Pa?dl=0

>> No.5023  

>>5011 will check it soon apologize if it took forever.

>> No.5024  

>>5023
You still want to check it or release?

>> No.5029  

>>4462
Released.

>> No.5031  

there is stuff that needed to be edited...it would have been better to wait for him to fix it but ok.



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