One-shot. 16 pages.ED: http://www.mediafire.com/?pd6uob5dw9s09nm
One-shot. 16 pages.
ED: http://www.mediafire.com/?pd6uob5dw9s09nm
TL.
Signing up as editor.
A first QC for Dog's Life is available here: http://www.mediafire.com/file/5q73688do4d4q4q/Dog%27s_Life_QC1.zipSome comments:Front page: I have an alternative version of the front page where the original title has been removed completely, but I think the present one with the original title looks a bit better.Typesetting: I have taken a few minor liberties with regard to the translation...Periods have been dropped from single word sentences, i.e. "Haah" has been used instead of "Haah."I have not included the comment that explains the "Splaash" on page 3, as I was not sure if that was intended to be a TL-note. I have extended the sfx "VSSH" to "VSSSSSH", in order to better "fill out" the available space.
A first QC for Dog's Life is available here: http://www.mediafire.com/file/5q73688do4d4q4q/Dog%27s_Life_QC1.zip
Some comments:Front page: I have an alternative version of the front page where the original title has been removed completely, but I think the present one with the original title looks a bit better.
Typesetting: I have taken a few minor liberties with regard to the translation...
>>5183Looks good, can I release it like this?
Please release it with the updated credits page (appended file).
>>5185Thanks, released.
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