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>>1871
I can't feel the deference between the two names. I can only say Sonohana (2006-) is clearly refer to "Lillian Girls' Academy" (Maria sama ga miteru 1996-).
I continue TLC.
s010 - s016:
I found no subject-object exchanged. Perhaps translators are tired in last 2 segments..?
> - <7AA7> 「親は週末、地方で公演があるから、家に家族はいないのです。わたくしはひとりっ子ですし」=「My parents are going to be at a show in the country this weekend, so I'll be all on my own.」
so I'll be all on my own. -> and I'm an only child.
> - <8B3F> 「銀盤の妖精のよう。貴女の白い肌が、より白く見えますから」=「You're like a fairy from a frozen lake. It makes your white skin seem even paler.」
# 銀盤の妖精 means figure skaters usually, and sometimes the word means only Janet Lynn, Sapporo Olympic bronze medalist.
# http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Janet_Lynn
# How to translate.. is it better to leave as is ?
> - <EAA6> 「姫始め」=「"First time".」
# meaning is "First time of new year".
nothing♪
# Hanafuda card game's terms are like magic spell, but in SH8 it's ok.
# In SH10...many old childish games ...maybe headache.
#for reference :-)
# Please image bridge, poker or mahjong.
# In this scene, probably they open the hand each other (or at least Eris open).
# *inosikachou : 'boar-deer-butterfly'
# *sanko : 'three-lights' likes three-card of Ace.
# *hanamizake : 'Cherry-blossom viewing' = A card "with a lot of cherry blossoms" and a "sake cup" card.
# Shizuku already exposed "hanamizake" to field, then Eris can not get the "a lot of blossoms" card.
# The "a lot of blossoms" card is one of "Ace" that Eris needs to make "sanko".
>- <4C17> 「じゃあ、雫とえっちなことをしても気付かれないわね」=「Oh, so they wouldn't notice if I had sex with you.」
# えっちな、ことをする(do something erotic/naughty) ≠ えっちする/えっちをする (slang: have sex/make love)
test
-> if I did something erotic with you. (...It's not natural I know ...)
>- <5B1D> 「いつも思うのだけど、シズクは冷たいわ」=「You're always so cold, Shizuku.」
-> I always think, you're cold, Shizuku.
# Eris didn't say 'Shizuku is always cold', I think.
>- s013 <39ED> 素振りの練習。=Time to practice how.
-> I exercise swing of my arm.
# 素振り= 1. (SOBURI) behavior/attitude. *2. (SUBURI) Practice swing of the bat/sword.
-s014
> - <7873> 「霧島さんも、少し休んだから帰っていいわよ」=「Once you've rested, you can head back, Kirishima-san.」
-> you can go home
# I wonder which is better 'you can head back' or ' you can go home'
# It is related to below comment (Deltacake-san?). It is Sonohana writers' lack of knowledge, I think. but how to translate? They make love just after this.
##- <73F9> 「貧血……」=「Fatigue...」
##It has always been bothering me that "貧血 (hinketsu)" is always translated as anemia. Anemia is a serious medical condition caused by a low RBC count or low hemoglobin levels. I think "hinketsu" in its most common usage mostly refers to lightheaded-ness caused by stress or hunger, so fatigue would be much more appropriate.
# And I suspect 少し休んだから is mis-input. -> 少し休んだら or 少し休んでから-> You get some rest and you can go home ...
> - <A69E> 「エリスの事は、本当にお慕いしているのに、気持ちを上手く伝えられないんです」=「Even though I really want to show that I love you, I can't convey my feelings properly.」
->Even though I really love you, I can't convey my feelings properly.
#お慕いしている is simply 'I love you'. ...the issue of expression?
> - <789D> 「シズク……ありがとう、親切にも程があるわよっ」=「Shizuku... thank you, you're so kind.」
#is the previous sentence supposed to sound weird?
#I think it has a couple of grammatical errors, but I'm not very sure.
## The comment is correct. **にも程がある means 'It is too bad about **'. This idiom is only used for bad thing (There 's proximity to the **).
## So, next sentence Shizuku says <794C> 「どんな日本語なんですかそれは……」=「What kind of Japanese was that...?」
## It's Eris's joke or emphasise.
> <24C7> 『シズクー』=「Shizukuu.」
> - <2552> 「しばらくこのままにさせて……」=「Just let me stay like this...」)
> <25F0> 『このままって……』=「Like this...」
> <2682> 『ふぅむ……』=「sigh」
> <270E> 『分かったわ』=「All right.」
# 『』kagi-kakko displays Eris' voice is heard through the futon.
# If 『』is allowed, 『』 is better.
# There is no voice but 「」 , is it okay for game system?
<24C7> 『シズクー』=『Shizukuu.』
- <2552> 「しばらくこのままにさせて……」=「Just let me stay like this...」)
<25F0> 『このままって……』=『Like this...』
<2682> 『ふぅむ……』=『sigh』
<270E> 『分かったわ』=『All right.』
>- <4CFF> 「ち、ちょっと、どこ吸ってるんですか!」=「W-Wait, where are you sucking?!」
>- <4DA5> 「シズクの弾力あるおっぱい」=「Your bouncy boobs.」
>- <4E40> 「誰も吸ってる場所なんか聞いてませんっ」=「I've never heard of people sucking that place.」
>- <4EE6> 「場所を聞かれたから答えただけなのに……日本語って難しいわ」=「You asked, so I answered... Japanese really is difficult.」
# <4E40> meaning 「No one ask you the place you're sucking!」
# (<4CFF> Shizuku's meaning 「Stop!, what are you doing?」)
# The meaning can be red as is?
test translation
- <4CFF> 「ち、ちょっと、どこ吸ってるんですか!」=「W-Wait, where are you sucking?!」
- <4DA5> 「シズクの弾力あるおっぱい」=「Your bouncy boobs.」
- <4E40> 「誰も吸ってる場所なんか聞いてませんっ」=「No one ask where you are sucking!」
- <4EE6> 「場所を聞かれたから答えただけなのに……日本語って難しいわ」=「You asked, so I answered... Japanese really is difficult.」