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http://www.mediafire.com/?2um5235g2a67wuo

>> No.3718  
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Here is a translation for this one.

>> No.4532  

I'll give this a try and edit it.

As this would be my first edit we'll see how it turns out.

>> No.4533  
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TL forgot to translate the edgy bubble in the lower right corner... (そそんなことあるわけっあっ)

my japanese isn't that good that i could translate it, so could someone do it for me?

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Sorry, wrong picture

>> No.4535  

OK, sorry, TL didn't forgot it, I just couldn't find it before...

>> No.4541  

Editing finished:

https://www.mediafire.com/?r4wycrz4g4i8qcg

>> No.4542  

>>4541
The link doesn't seem to work.

>> No.4544  

Hmm strange.... it works for me on different devices and ip addresses...
But I uploaded it again on Mega:
https://mega.co.nz/#!LddhzK7T!RIL_RGkbRQ087qh0_8S0njfRTE8kux_7eh8HE2ZMoko

>> No.4545  

>>4541
This link works for me.

>> No.4548  

>>4544
Thanks.

Page 3 (foreword)
since last winter's book hasn't it? =>
since last winter's book, hasn't it?

Hello I am Sakurairo Gorakubu. =>
Hello, I am Kiryuu Masumi.

"Original"...is what I thought =>
"An original"...is what I thought

Akira treatment =>
Akira's treatment

Page 4
The break in sempai is missing a dash.

It can't be helped, I'll just have to take that frustration out on Akari... =>
It can't be helped, I'll just have to take that frustration out on Akari-chan...

Page 6
“Feelings”?...maybe Passion would be a better word. =>
Though things looks pretty lusty now...

Well whatever it is, it doesn't look very peaceful. =>
Don't watch it like it's normal!

But hey... =>
Hey, remember?

This air is kind of making me feel... =>
This is kind of getting me in the mood...

Page 8
You say I can't? so what are you going to do, Yui? =>
Yes, I guess you're right. So, what now, Yui?
(teasing)

"You dummy..." <-- all text should be horizontal

Page 11
Are you feeling scared Yui? =>
Mmm, getting perky ♪ Are you aroused, Yui?

Page 12
My fingers are a little moist. =>
You've moistened my fingers a little.

Page 14
I think you'll enjoy it most this way. =>
I think you'll enjoy this the most ♪

Page 18
Yui, your missing out... => (あふれる)
It's because... you're overflowing so much, Yui...

Page 19
Ooh... it feels so good! =>
Ooh... it feels so good! I can't stop! (horizontal)

Page 21
Today is the day you really get to hear what I have to say! =>
Today is the day you really gonna make you listen to what I have to say!

I think yelling should be enough Ayano-chan. =>
You're too excited, Ayano-chan.

Tsk. =>
Um...

What’s this supposed to be =>
What's this atmosphere...

The tea room is all pink... =>
Like a pink cloud hangs in the tea room...

What... =>
I...

Looks like there's a couple in there really being intimate…this pink is almost like cherry blossoms. =>
This cherry-blossom pink feeling means there's a couple being intimate in here.

Page 22
This is the afterword. =>
The afterword already.

>> No.4549  

>>4548
Thank you for your feedback, although I didn't fully understand what you ment at:

>Page 8
>You say I can't? so what are you going to do, Yui? =>
>Yes, I guess you're right. So, what now, Yui?
>(teasing)

and

>Page 18
>Yui, your missing out... => (あふれる)
>It's because... you're overflowing so much, Yui...

I edited it like I thought it could be right...

Uploaded again on Mega, as this worked for you last time:
https://mega.co.nz/#!240FDBTZ!W73LxZmcjKZz35ayqWuo1TE9D6CDhE4bgfsmPKf3A30

>> No.4552  

>>4549
Thanks, yeah like that.
Page 14
I think you'll enjoy this the most.
"Enjoy" is missing.

>> No.4553  

And mediafire does work for me normally. I think it was just Firefox's Adblock acting up.

>> No.4554  

>>4552
Fixed:
https://mega.co.nz/#!Kkdw1QRb!fngJOVR8xI0dAxDrsBQQTDkaQwsTeOKEd7mGuRLP7jE

>> No.4681  

Sorry that it took so long, but this should be the right form now:
http://www.mediafire.com/download/97zr1xo3535dx5n/
Do I need to do anything else?

>> No.4726  
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>>4681



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