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2226445 No.5109   [Reply]

Raws by WeatheredPeach: https://mega.nz/#!yEo1VAJY!wd1vsBiJiqC9Y73vNkBhwWOGqKN5ugRL7JM7ADqr69s

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>> No.5544  

>>5538
p18 Miharu//-san
can't say for the rest

>> No.5545  
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>>5538

Here are some recommended changes. Don't forget the hyphen position change from >>5544 .

There are a few general things I noticed. I drew attention to specific instances of these early on, but they recur throughout the chapter. I'm going to give a brief summary on some of the points I think are most important for this edit below; for more detailed information and examples, I recommend Anon Black's Typesetting Guide ( http://prettyanonymo.us/index.php/scanlation-resources/anonblacks-typesetting-guide/ ) and Red Hawk Scanlations' guide ( https://fallensyndicate.wordpress.com/typesetting-tutorial/ ), if you weren't already familiar with them.

Here are some of the main things I think are most important to focus on for this chapter:

・Text shaping. Ideally, the shape of the text matches the shape of its container. Rounder if it's in a circular bubble, more rectangular if it's in a square caption. A lot of the text in this edit has a sort of hourglass shape: thinner in the center than it is at the top or bottom. This is generally a shape to avoid, unless the container is shaped in such a way that it seems natural.
・Lining. Inextricably related to shaping is the practice of deciding where to split a line. Try to avoid "orphans," or a single word on a particular line; this can lead to hourglasses, or one line that really stands out against the lines above and below it.

Side note: I'm guessing that you used a lot of text boxes when typesetting this. Here ( http://prettyanonymo.us/index.php/scanlation-resources/anonblacks-typesetting-guide/typesetting-201-lining/ ), Anon Black explains why text boxes should used only sparingly, and what Photoshop calls "point text" should be used as a rule.

・Text size. You don't always want to take up as much space in a bubble as you can. In general, text should be the same size, not varying by more than two or three pts except for dramatic effect. Just because the bubble is larger, that doesn't mean the text has to be larger; the original Japanese text often doesn't take up even nearly all the space in a bubble.

Thank you for all your work. We're not quite ready for a release yet, but we're definitely getting there.

>> No.5553  

>>5545
Sorry for the late.
https://mega.nz/#!20BTACpZ!B7YQDsfM7_Q6CIjR6fp2Rxp3p4p4a90XSrqgVvol_xQ

>> No.5554  

>>5553
Released.

>> No.5555  

I was a bit confused, she calls her "her sister" but she is actually her aunt...



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227264 No.5549   [Reply]

Raws: https://www13.zippyshare.com/v/c2A7sp6A/file.html



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3761173 No.5107   [Reply]

Raws by WeatheredPeach: https://mega.nz/#!qd4hjYgD!a0CagOoW0SHmO2X_3f30FVqy7TplKXBVQjT8-jl3DaY

>> No.5455  

Does this need a translation as well or is it already taken by other groups? I love Takano Saku's art style.

>> No.5460  

>>5455

It's not on Dynasty, so I assume it hasn't been done before. A translation would be welcome.

>> No.5461  

>>5455>>5460
I think it was translated bu Yuri-Ism:
https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/you_my_childhood_friend#1



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1024841 No.5441   [Reply]

https://www.mediafire.com/#c4dh0p8y501r7

>> No.5442  

Found in COMIC Penguin Club 2016-06. Can anyone please translate? I can assist with editing.

>> No.5443  

This link is invalid.

>> No.5444  

>>5443

Re-uploaded it on Medialink with a new url:

https://www.mediafire.com/#hhls4qn6vqgn5



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615645 No.1209   [Reply]

TL Raw: http://www.mediafire.com/?fadjfgnykda1zi1
ED Raw: http://www.mediafire.com/?bvi3n2kijojrc2v

RAW provider: Anon from /u/

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>> No.5422  

The third draft is finished and ready for QC: http://www.mediafire.com/file/d9dwt2i38lg8gy3/Sister%20Sun%2C%20Sister%20Moon_QC3.zip

It turned out that the rescaling I initially considered turned out to give a result that really did not look that much different from the use of the "CC Wild Words Bold Italic"-font. Thus I used the latter on instead, but with the minor twist that I reduced the font size with one compared to the surrounding text.

>> No.5423  

>>5422

I think this is suitable for release.

>> No.5425  

>>5422
Released.

>> No.5434  
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322773

My apologies, but today I noted that one of the layers on the first page had been displaced a pixel to the left at some time during the final QC - and this resulted in some black stripes at the upper part of the right border.

A revised version of the first page has been uploaded with this post, and I have also updated the QC3-archive so the correct version is present there too.

Another ting:
I hope I will have the time to do a project or two this autumn - and with regard to that, I have looked a bit on the projects listed on the status page. There I have noticed a collection of six untranslated stories by Asagi Ryuu, i.e. http://nsfw.yuri-project.net/res/2013.html, http://nsfw.yuri-project.net/res/2012.html, http://nsfw.yuri-project.net/res/2011.html, http://nsfw.yuri-project.net/res/81.html, http://nsfw.yuri-project.net/res/2009.html and http://nsfw.yuri-project.net/res/2007.html
I would like to edit these Asagi Ryuu projects if translations can be provided.

>> No.5435  

>>5434
Updated.



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301934 No.5428   [Reply]

Can someone please translate? I can assist.

>> No.5429  

https://www.mediafire.com/#xtg7dx9c5g9qi

>> No.5430  

>>5428

Yuri-bot's already done this one: https://twitter.com/Yuri_Bot_Scans/status/766456979661262852

>> No.5433  

>>5430

My bad. Now why wasn't it uploaded in sites like e-hentai and nhentai?



No.5414   [Reply]

I wanted to update the credits page before I went to work this morning - and now I realised that I messed up and replaced the first page instead of the credits page...

This has now been fixed, and the same link as before now gives the correct version.



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337112 No.5321   [Reply]

One-shot, 16 pages.
http://www.mediafire.com/file/g1deldqs8uryt4w/%5BKodama_Naoko%5D_Shishunki_Medical.rar

Anyone willing to translate this? I can do the editing.

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>> No.5385  

>>5384

One major fix, as per >>5350 :

0028.png

But I've got intention of letting go you. -> But I've got no intention of letting you go. (Insert "no," transpose "go" and "you")

On a less significant note, double-check the centering on your text within the bubbles. You've erred on the high side, which is the right side to err on, but I think that probably you could afford to lower some of your text to put it closer to center. The bubbles on 0016.png and 0022.png are fairly good examples of text that looks a little too high to me (probably not more than ~5-10px), though there are other examples scattered about.

>> No.5386  

>>5384

Just two things:

Page 18

Top Right Panel
Text
On ther hand, I don't have any plans at all.
change to
On the other hand, I don't have any plans at all.

Page 19

Top Left Panel
Left Bubble
We had a report?
change to
There was a report due?
>> No.5387  

>>5385
>>5386
http://www.mediafire.com/file/21r4rkv4rx4f70a/Shishunki_Medical_QCv1.rar/

>> No.5388  

>>5387

I think this is good. At least as far as the script goes. I'm not good at judging spacing and such, but it looks fine to me.

>> No.5393  

>>5387
Released.



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398802 No.5371   [Reply]

Can anyone please translate? I can assist in proofreading.

http://www.mediafire.com/file/lu57a3rx5o47umy

33 Pages. Found in Towako 4.

https://nhentai.net/g/230891/

>> No.5372  

Was this inspired by Carol?



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45421 No.5347   [Reply]

Any chance we can either translate this, or make the voice files work with the english release?

>> No.5351  

>>5347
It's licenced by mangagamer. They will also release it as dlc and switch to ren'py engine.

>> No.5352  

>>5351 Wait, when did THIS happen?!

>> No.5354  

>>5352
https://twitter.com/MangaGamer/status/979904946983366656

http://mangagamer.org/kindredspirits/fullchorus/



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